Early Vine

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Early Vine

White heads held elegantly
Gold hearts exposed to chilled air
Faces scan for sun’s warming

Debutantes on solar breath, dancing
Darker partners, holding, climbing
Together weaving, darting, vining

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~ by aletta mes on April 6, 2007.

5 Responses to “Early Vine”

  1. This does look like a nature dance, very effective.

  2. Lovely image… it appears to me as dancers would when seen from above. Very effective.

  3. These are beautiful, so fairy-like…what are they?

  4. What a fantastic cadence this poem has. Bravo!

  5. These are so delicate, so lovely. The poem too, is delicate and lovely. They pair well.

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